Soda
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Post by Soda on Dec 31, 2008 17:43:07 GMT -5
"With nothing left to lose, we leave our lives to fate.
Good or bad, glad or sad... To Victory!
With little more to give, we lift our hopes to fate.
Live or die, fail but try... We need victory. Or else.
The whole world rests on these shoulders.
All of existance depends on our strength...
So with, so much in our way... we hope for a miracle.
There is only two fates. Death, or on to victory.
Only two paths. Peace, or our world's end."
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Post by Rundas on Jan 1, 2009 14:44:52 GMT -5
This ain't the first poem I've seen from you. I'm noticing a pattern or a style. >_>
Almost as if in order for it to be a real poem, you need to imagine a fitting rhythm.
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Soda
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Post by Soda on Jan 2, 2009 14:06:47 GMT -5
Suuuuuuuuuuure. It's just a poem, man. If I have any style, then I rather not know what it is.
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